Senpai Cat 44 Report post Posted August 1, 2012 Please CnC I haven't made a signature in awhile. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gremlinn 20 Report post Posted August 2, 2012 Not too bad..lol Work on that bg, it looks mix matched. Transition it smoother. The light FX aren't really complimenting your render.Arrange it to match the render's flow. Maybe try a diff blend mode on that smudging to screen or something. It looks kinda dark and smothering on the render. I like that text, but it's too far away. Placed closer to his shoulder would look much better i think and sample colors from the sig for the text so it blends better. Lastly, watch the depth. It;s over sharp on some parts and over blurred on others.Instead of brushing the blur, maybe try a gradient blur so it's smooth. Like i said, not bad..it will get better with more practice. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Senpai Cat 44 Report post Posted August 2, 2012 >.>.... Shower me in your shower booth of knowledge.. Thanks for the tips bro, I will definitely look into that on my next work. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gremlinn 20 Report post Posted August 2, 2012 Hahaha...master of words,u are! Just my opinion..someone else will see it differently as art is subjective Share this post Link to post Share on other sites